Today we're generating a list of horrid sentences and then making them stronger. We talked about sensory detail and the importance of it in creative writing.
The "bad" sentences we generated are as follows:
- The boy smelled bad.
- The cat wanted a treat.
- I went to the store.
- The night was cold.
- They walked in.
- The apple is gross.
- The man looked sad.
- She laughed very hard.
- The garden was nice.
- The man grabbed the flowers.
- It was raining.
- The house is white.
- The kid was scared.
- The band was loud.
- Running is hard.
You selected eight of the fifteen and made them descriptive. We then shared them in class.
We made a list of places we had strong feelings toward. The list is as follows:
Homework: Strong writers tend to be strong readers. Find a piece (paragraph, poem, whatever) that describes place. Bring it to class to share with your peers.